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I HAD YOU ONCE !

by Whitney Podhradsky

 

I had you once but now your gone
I feel like a motherless fawn
So hard to breath, I’m not lying
My heart is in so much pain I feel like dieing

I had you once and now you see
I cannot be who I want to be
I try and I try but it wont come true
My heart is dieing slowly without you

I had you once but now were done
I hope and I pray I don’t grab a gun
I love you with all my heart
And I think about you when we are apart

This love for you will always stand true
Before and after, until we say I do
And if that can't happen and we come to an end
I hope and I pray that we can still be friends

 

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VRY VRY VRY GD

I'm Claire. I do not believe in going back as friends once you made a commitment of saying you love someone. When you love someone the word is actually when you say enough is enough, its never enough and you will not stop loving them to end of time, always want more of someone you feel for. Never just friends. They may just come in to your  life again if you wait, how long you do not know, maybe. Just wish upon a star

i don't think u can ever jus be friends, to much involved. im speaking from experience. we keep going back to each other, but in the end nuffin comes from it. that hurts too much

 

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